Footprint / #HaikuSeed / Feature With Commentary

Featuring haiku written by Alex Fyffe for the #HaikuSeed footprint

glistening leaf the slug’s long footprint

– Alex Fyffe / @AsurasHaiku


A Few Thoughts On the Haiku

What can I say? Honestly, I’m speechless. Who would dare call a slug’s slimy trail a footprint! What an amazing thing to read. And before the writer let loose his wild imagination, he prefaced it with the idea of a glistening leaf. It brought so much color and beauty to the image forming in my head.


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