Summer / #HaikuSeed / Feature With Commentary

Featuring this brilliant haiku written for the #HaikuSeed summer

scorching summer noon
a young tree trying to rest
in its own shadow

– Sarita Talwai, @TalwaiSarita

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Summer / #HaikuSeed / Daily Haiku Prompt

#HaikuSeed / 21 Feb, 2022
summer

Try to use a kigo (seasonal word/reference/context) in your haiku, be it the prompt word itself or something else you find apt. Hoping some great haiku sprout from this Haiku Seed.

A Few Reminders About Writing Haiku:

  • A good haiku consists of two images juxtaposed together using as simple a language as possible allowing the reader to visualize the scene and fill all the things left unsaid.
  • Usually in haiku, one image acts as a fragment and the other as a phrase. These two are traditionally separated by a keriji (cutting word). In English, we make use of punctuation like ellipses (…), em-dash (—) and other characters to denote a cut/break between the two images. This break between the two images in the haiku has a lot of significance and plays a major role in how deep and vivid your haiku becomes in the reader’s mind. It is not merely a punctuation!
  • The #HaikuSeed prompt is just that – a seed. Your haiku need not feature the prompt word as long as the haiku is triggered from the prompt word and contains some aspect relevant to the prompt word.

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Heat / #HaikuSeed / Feature With Commentary

Featuring two haiku written for the #HaikuSeed heat

summer heat
barefoot dancing
with mosquitoes

soaking heat …
I am the fly’s
sip of water

– Richard Barnes / @NaumaddicArts

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